Different Drums
She demanded a romantic relationship
Labels: poetry
Life takes us many places. It's a box of chocolates and a Hansel and Gretal trail of candy wrappers. I have filmed as an actor in The Happening, Invincible, The Lovely Bones, The Bounty Hunter, The Greek American, Bazookas, Limitless, TV's Its Always Sunny in Philly, Outlaw, New York, The Warrior, The Nail, Game Change, Cold Case, & commercial work includes The Philadelphia Eagles, Septa, Coors, Turbo Tax & Carnival Cruises. Freudian Slips spotlights irony in short story format.
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Remembering scenes, best left in the past, will cause agony and self-loathing and emotional defeat. Better to shed the act and absorb life's lesson that will last.
Anonymous,
If only I could somehow advise the fictional characters in my poetry. But I hear you.
Joe - with great respect for your creativity and beautiful writing, might I say that the girl is portrayed too much the villain, because afterall, the guy did succumb - and that is equally unforgivable. Agreed?
Dr.
So she isn't a V for Villain. lol. I wrote it from the man's perspective which shouldn't absolve his mistake. Regardless of gender, the heart is the hardest muscle to voluntarily control.
Dr.
Perhaps she was just too brilliant and beautiful to resist. Afterall, no means no. Don't you agree?
Joe,
How does that old soul song go?
"You can't find love on a one-way street.
It takes two to tango.
It takes two to even compete".
Something like that.
Loved the poem.
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